1) On theme #1 I did a good job I just handed it in late. I feel I deserve the grade I got because of me turning it late but had it been on time I would definitely be fine with the score I got. I took the revisions and actually used them in my paper. I saw things that I had messed up on and realized why they did not work out how they were supposed and I helped use them to do better on the new copy.
2) Now that I was given a chance to take what the theme reader and Mr. Gabriele wrote down for me to do I can get a better view of what is needed to make a paper 100% worthy. I need to focus on tying my paper together from beginning to end.
3) Next time I will make sure it not only gets handed in on time but that I check over it and reread it multiple times to make sure that everything flows. It was a hard topic to write about since it was someone I lost but next time I will have a couple read it and edit it before I hand it in.
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